Observations of The Urban Spaceman

Just Right

Posted on February 27, 2017 By The Urban Spaceman

Neither hot nor cold

the most delicious bowl holds

Baby Bear’s porridge

ufo

Written for today’s WordPress daily prompt, Center.

Category: Haiku Tags: bear, center, fable, fairytale, goldilocks, Haiku, poem, porridge, tale

6 Comments on “Just Right”

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Sam Brady
March 2, 2017

Brilliant! I think there needs to be a series of fairy tale haiku. What could you do with Red Riding Hood? Cinderella?

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- The Urban Spaceman
  March 2, 2017
  
  I heartily agree! 😉
  
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Jade M. Wong
February 27, 2017

Ahh, Goldilocks 🙂 neat little take on the story!

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- The Urban Spaceman
  February 27, 2017
  
  Thanks! I love fairytales, fables, parables, the kinda stuff you get read as a kid but never gets old. 🙂
  
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  - Jade M. Wong
    February 27, 2017
    
    I’m the same! I don’t believe one is ever too old for a good story 🙂
    
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